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== J ohn Taliaferro Thompson was the inventor of the weapos :the thompson. He was born the 3rd december 1860 in Newport, Kentucky. He was an officer of american army. The first thompson was created in 1919.The weapon was used by gangsters in the 1920s. His invention was adopted by the U.S. Marine Corps and was used during World War II. John died at his residence in Newport in 1940 when he was 79 years old. John is a great man who created an invention more popular than him which was a big success!!!! ==

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